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Written 31 May 2025 for Your Choice R Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Early Summer Hiku 23 r -i -p e -n -I -n –g cherries h a n g i n g on trees in daylight bats feasting at night. morning s –u –n –s –h –I –n –e wastage and garbage on g r o u n d harvest hopes s ~h ~a ~t ~t ~e ~r ~e ~d.

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Date: 6/1/2025 11:31:00 AM
Another double ku set. Neat-o! Oh those rascally pests!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/2/2025 10:58:00 PM
Thank you poetess friend for appreciating the write. Wishing you wonderful day.
Date: 6/1/2025 10:29:00 AM
Very well crafted haiku with wonderful metaphoric layers related to nature and its marvel, dear poet friend. I wish you luck with the contest.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/2/2025 10:54:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the write and for your kind wishes. Greetings and wishing you a pleasant day.

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