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Early Summer Hiku 23

                 Early Summer Hiku 23

r -i -p e -n -I -n –g   cherries

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                           g    on trees in daylight   
                
                              bats feasting at night.  
                   

morning s –u –n –s –h –I –n –e

wastage and garbage on     g
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                                                              d

   harvest hopes s ~h ~a ~t ~t ~e ~r ~e ~d.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Another double ku set. Neat-o! Oh those rascally pests!
Guptar Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 10:58 PM
Thank you poetess friend for appreciating the write. Wishing you wonderful day.
Poet Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Very well crafted haiku with wonderful metaphoric layers related to nature and its marvel, dear poet friend. I wish you luck with the contest.
Guptar Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 10:54 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the write and for your kind wishes. Greetings and wishing you a pleasant day.
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