Placed First in: Your Choice R Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand
Early Summer Hiku 23 r -i -p e -n -I -n –g cherries h a n g i n g on trees in daylight bats feasting at night. morning s –u –n –s –h –I –n –e wastage and garbage on g r o u n d harvest hopes s ~h ~a ~t ~t ~e ~r ~e ~d.
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