Written 31 May 2025, Edited on 29 July 2025 for: < 7 Poetry Contest of Rob Carmack
Early Summer Haiku Edited ripening cherries hanging on trees in daylight~ bats feasting at night; at morning sunshine wastage and garbage on ground~ harvest hopes shattered.
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