Early Spring Collection

gold morning daylight
buds joined to spindly branches
clear dew reflects hill

from its hive bee flew
pollen sticks to its long hairs~
sun bluebonnets face

crunch of fallen leaves
litter layer earthworm feed~
croaking wood frog leaps

9/21/2022

A Haiku Collection Of Three - Nature Themed Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:01 AM
~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Very descriptive winning Haiku series. I enjoyed reading them this morning. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Wow! As usual! Beautiful! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:17 AM
So glad to see this on the winners' list . You did a very fine job with it, Eve. Congratulations
Poet Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear, Eve.
May Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Congrats on your win wwith this lovely write Eve
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 4:50 AM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement, beautiful imagery in your poems!
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM
- Beautiful spring collection, Eve :) - The best time of the year - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful haiku set Eve. You were able to express a wonderful vision with the diction that you used. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Tor Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Love your nature Haiku Eve a joy to read Dear lady... Thanks for shaing...
Buhagiar Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 1:08 AM
lovely images of nature. Best for a win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Nice Haiku on sight and sound of spring, Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:45 PM
ahhh you took us back to spring. Delightful set, Eve. Not sure, but I think we have to put Collection in the title.
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 8:30 PM
she does not really say, but to me, this looks fine now.
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Does the title have to be only 2 words?
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