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Early Spring

winter cowers
             in shrinking shadows…
                pale and sweating

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2015 at 11:03 PM

I"m so glad you changed line three. Wow, this is REALLY GOOD (now I gotta check and see if I ever put you on MY fave list, after seeing what Armand wrote you. Maybe I already have, but I better double check)

April 1, 2015 at 7:07 PM

Holy Moly David, I thought I would double check thinking no way...so sorry I had forgotten to add you to my fav poets list. Shame on me!

April 1, 2015 at 7:18 PM

Thanks so much my friend...you made my night!

April 1, 2015 at 7:04 PM

Wow, I just read a brilliant Tanka and now an Haiku (or should I say non traditional haiku). Love this very creative image.

March 31, 2015 at 8:32 AM

Good one! Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 30, 2015 at 12:36 AM

I sure do like your nontraditional haiku. though the last line is cliche, it just really fits the poem!

March 30, 2015 at 10:23 AM

Good point Andrea...I changed the last line

March 28, 2015 at 6:48 PM

beautiful image- :)

March 28, 2015 at 6:34 PM

wonderful imagery this is beautiful David:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx

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