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Early Spring

                   winter cowers
             in shrinking shadows…
                pale and sweating

             

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/1/2015 11:03:00 PM
I"m so glad you changed line three. Wow, this is REALLY GOOD (now I gotta check and see if I ever put you on MY fave list, after seeing what Armand wrote you. Maybe I already have, but I better double check)
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:07:00 PM
Holy Moly David, I thought I would double check thinking no way...so sorry I had forgotten to add you to my fav poets list. Shame on me!
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david mohn
Date: 4/1/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend...you made my night!
Date: 4/1/2015 7:04:00 PM
Wow, I just read a brilliant Tanka and now an Haiku (or should I say non traditional haiku). Love this very creative image.
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Date: 3/31/2015 8:32:00 AM
Good one! Kim :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:36:00 AM
I sure do like your nontraditional haiku. though the last line is cliche, it just really fits the poem!
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david mohn
Date: 3/30/2015 10:23:00 AM
Good point Andrea...I changed the last line
Date: 3/28/2015 6:48:00 PM
beautiful image- :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 6:34:00 PM
wonderful imagery this is beautiful David:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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