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Early Spring

Early spring flowers tulips poke heads ground unfrozen Sweet floral scent blooming blossoms drifts on the wind Bird of spring robin red breast chirping melody Trying my hand at Haiku again. not the traditional Japanese 5-7-5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 7/28/2011 1:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive of spring weather..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:40:00 AM
I like this. It really speaks Spring to me. Nice imagery. The thing with this type of poem is to say much with few words. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:19:00 PM
Great hand Phyllis,... a nice song to share,... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:44:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. You have me smiling. Spring is starting to come to North Dakota after a challenging winter. Happy Easter! Karen
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:57:00 AM
Hi Phyl , what a pleasant " Babcock Haiku", special . Spring in 3 verses . Tks for your kind words and write onnnnnnn ....
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:39:00 PM
Loved this beatiful and refreshing and warm Haiku. Thank you for reading my Fort Sumter and for your comment. I almost didn't write it, i did it at the last minute on the 12th Of Apirl, the day I posted it.
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:15:00 PM
cheery verse for our spring! Is your ground unfrozen yet, dear? I am starting to see the blossoms on my two front yard trees. I decided to comment here since the one above this has not gotten any real comments of note , just two people telling you it needs to be removed. Hope you have a lovely weekend. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/15/2011 9:02:00 AM
Love Spring, Phyllis! This is a warm and cherished write to this sometimes wary season. Lots of birds "chirping melody", but the scent and colours hasn't arrived yet. This makes me feel hopeful! Wishing you the best! Mikki
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:07:00 PM
super fine imagery Phyllis bringing Spring to the Soup with this lovely set of Haikus... perfect descriptions my friend..luv..
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:59:00 PM
Lovely expressions on the advent of the spring, Phyllis
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:41:00 PM
oh phyllis, if spring were always like this captivating piece, this season would just be as charming... exquisitely rendered! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:07:00 PM
You have captured the sights, sounds and scents of the season very well in your haiku, Phyllis. Great modern haiku! Thank you for your comments. I don't know what became of the draft dodgers who fled to Canada. Thank goodness we have a volunteer army now -- some people are just not cut out for combat. Don't think I could have ever fired a bullet at the enemy. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 12:50:00 PM
Lovely imagery of the early spring, Phyllis
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