Early Spring

Backlit branches shake hands with the night
Colossal thunderheads flash white
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:15 PM
I don't know if crystallines should be rhymed, but what the heck, this is awesome!
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Very descriptive image, Robb. The reader can see the lightning and "feel" the power of the thunder. Best wishes, Carolyn
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