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Early On

Sitting there alone in class
they said it wasn't cool.
He should not bring his bible
to read while he's in school.

The gave him detention
and they took his book away.
While he watched through the window
when the rest went out to play.

Then one day at home, at play
he was out collecting bugs.
He saw in the shed out back
his daddy doing drugs.

Mom and dad went their own ways
his life was filled with hurts.
Over time as time went on
he turned his back on church.

So many things that he would face
with so little understanding.
Life for him it seems to me
had become just too demanding.

New friends made no games are played
he turned his life to crime.
Until the day the law got him
and now he's doing time.

Other prisoners come and go
each going their own way.
But they gave him a bible
now he reads it every day.

Why is it that we never learn
until our chance is gone?
To give our children hope they need
while it's still early on?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/28/2015 10:45:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/28/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thank you sir! :) And God bless you. Thank you for the 7 and the read! Ed
Date: 5/25/2015 7:56:00 AM
Children do seem to lose out on the early influences, more and more, today. Food for thought.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/25/2015 8:09:00 AM
Unfortunately that is true. Thank you M. L. For taking time to say hi! :) Happy Memorial Day!
Date: 5/23/2015 2:59:00 AM
EDWIN, thank you for sharing, it was a delight to read. **SKAT**
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/25/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thank you SKAT! Always nice to see and hear from you. God bless and Happy Memorial Day!!! Ed
Date: 5/22/2015 11:39:00 AM
This is so Ironic Ed. I am so glad I had Religious Education all through grammar and high school. In my opinion it gives me the ability to see myself in another's shoes...excellent a fav Tim
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/22/2015 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Tim. While overdue it was inspired by a post on face book today. My source for a lot of inspiration :) Hope you have a great weekend!!
Date: 5/22/2015 10:18:00 AM
Wise words indeed in the final stanza Edwin. Sadly so many of the people who do get into trouble with the law have learning disabilities too:-( Hugs jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/22/2015 10:20:00 AM
That is so sadly true!
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