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Early Morning Waves

Deep roots in firm ground Silver moonlight boldly plays Magic with the stars Cool the salty air Draft of a slow, lazy dawn Waves wet on my hands

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2015 6:48:00 PM

I enjoyed these two. I especially liked the imagery of the second one.

Julie Heckman
Date: 6/21/2015 7:47:00 AM

thank you Andrea glad you liked it...

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/20/2015 2:50:00 PM

Very nicely done, Julie! The imagery takes me to the sea's shore, a 7 :)

Julie Heckman
Date: 6/21/2015 7:49:00 AM

nice response Laura thank you

Eve Roper

Date: 6/20/2015 11:49:00 AM

Julie, I can just smell the ocean salty air a 7. Hugs Eve

Julie Heckman
Date: 6/21/2015 8:05:00 AM

the smell of the ocean is mezmerizing

Julie Heckman
Date: 6/21/2015 8:01:00 AM

thank youo Eve

Julie Heckman
Date: 6/20/2015 1:09:00 PM

thank you Eve