Early Morning Waves

Deep roots in firm ground
Silver moonlight boldly plays
Magic with the stars

Cool the salty air
Draft of a slow, lazy dawn
Waves wet on my hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 6:48 PM
I enjoyed these two. I especially liked the imagery of the second one.
Heckman Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 7:47 AM
thank you Andrea glad you liked it...
Leiser Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Very nicely done, Julie! The imagery takes me to the sea's shore, a 7 :)
Heckman Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 7:49 AM
nice response Laura thank you
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Julie, I can just smell the ocean salty air a 7. Hugs Eve
Heckman Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:05 AM
the smell of the ocean is mezmerizing
Heckman Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:01 AM
thank youo Eve
Heckman Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 1:09 PM
thank you Eve
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