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Early Morning Walk

The playground hadn’t opened; The sun had yet to rise And many might think walking In the dark would not be wise. A mist hung by the river, A tugboat pulled a barge; The cars inched down the F.D.R., Their headlights looming large. The puddles, partly hidden, Glinted dully in the gloom, Soon to saturate some sneakers Not expecting them to loom. It was magic to be walking; The few others I did see Were the regulars who love Their early exercise, like me.

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Date: 12/6/2021 5:20:00 PM
Retirement can be more enjoyable than youth
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Date: 12/6/2021 3:58:00 PM
Intriguing to me. You seem cautious about many things. Yet walking in the dark in NY City... As for me, I've been mugged twice within 100 yards of my home walking in Chicago before dawn. Don't do that no more, no more, no more, no more! ~ I hit the road, Jack
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Date: 12/6/2021 10:50:00 AM
Before Europeans arrived, everyone on your island did that . . . . .
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Date: 12/6/2021 7:07:00 AM
Best time of day Ilene when not many are about and you feel you have the world to yourself. Tom
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