Early Morning Walk

The playground hadn’t opened;
The sun had yet to rise
And many might think walking
In the dark would not be wise.

A mist hung by the river,
A tugboat pulled a barge;
The cars inched down the F.D.R.,
Their headlights looming large.

The puddles, partly hidden,
Glinted dully in the gloom,
Soon to saturate some sneakers
Not expecting them to loom.

It was magic to be walking;
The few others I did see
Were the regulars who love
Their early exercise, like me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Borke Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:20 PM
Retirement can be more enjoyable than youth
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Intriguing to me. You seem cautious about many things. Yet walking in the dark in NY City... As for me, I've been mugged twice within 100 yards of my home walking in Chicago before dawn. Don't do that no more, no more, no more, no more! ~ I hit the road, Jack
Leffanta Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Before Europeans arrived, everyone on your island did that . . . . .
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Best time of day Ilene when not many are about and you feel you have the world to yourself. Tom
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