L Milton Hankins Poet Tritina

Early Morning Surfers

Along the beach the youthful surfers gather
To survey the breakers pounding the coral reef
In the late morning hours before the crowds arrive.

Then one by one, board under arm, they arrive
At the sea’s edge, wade in, and quickly gather
Near the jagged line formed by the coral reef.

Once the surfers are beyond the coral reef
They anxiously await the largest wave to arrive
Paddling hard they ride; on the shore they gather.   

Again, they arrive and gather, facing the reef.

written June 25, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger June 26, 2021 at 9:29 PM I have a feeling you are a surfer Hank! L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 10:15 PM I tried it only once, off Waikiki Beach, when I was in Hawaii. I wasn't good at it, but the waves weren't that great either. I never ever lived close enough to the beach to keep up with it. It is a very difficult sport!

Gershon Wolf June 26, 2021 at 9:13 PM Well-observed and rendered, Milt. ~ Beach Boy L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 9:18 PM Thanks so much, gw. I always appreciate your read and your comments.

Tom Cunningham June 26, 2021 at 3:15 AM Have never surfed but water skied in Mauritius a long time ago, You created a wonderful scene, surfers waiting for the big one. Enjoy your weekend Milton. Tom L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 8:48 AM Thanks, Tom. I have surfed only once, off the shore of Waikiki Beach in Hawaii. I wasn't good at it, so I quickly gave it up. I have water skied on a lake...very enjoyable. Thanks for your thoughtful comments.

Lindsay Laurie June 25, 2021 at 11:34 PM Hello Milton … not being a surfer myself, I can never work out why surfers wear black wetsuits, the same colour as seals, the favoured meal of sharks. Sounds like a fun sport early in the morning though Milton - Lindsay Rico Leffanta June 26, 2021 at 12:18 PM Black wetsuits against a whitewater background keep camera designers employed. Aloha! Rico L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 8:50 AM Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Lindsay. I am not a surfer, so this was a fictional write. I have, however, observed the surfers gathering on the beach and surveying the incoming breakers.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2021 at 10:15 PM Youthful adventure, fun and daring make wonderful memories and tales when we are old. Beautifully written, Milton. kindest regards, Evelyn :) L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 8:51 AM Thanks, Evelyn. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem about surfing.