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Early Morning On a Mississippi Highway

There's a thick fog over the trees A fine Mist in the air A subtle yet calming breeze And the Temperature is fair The grass is heavy with Dew The sky's an overcast color of gray Vehicles are sporadic and few its a beautiful yet gloomy day on this Mississippi highway

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Date: 1/17/2023 6:59:00 AM
You've hit "beautiful yet gloomy" right on the head Ettie, nicely done. I can picture it just as you've described, eerie and calming
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 1/17/2023 2:25:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 1/16/2023 3:58:00 PM
Thanks for the pit stop Ettie, slowed me down and eased my mind...nicely written and some fine imagery
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 1/17/2023 2:25:00 PM
thank you!

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