Early Morning In Walvis Bay

Hand in hand with the breaking pink light of dawn, 
A light east breeze dances on tiptoes upon the water’s surface. 
I stand on the wooden deck, looking out onto the quiet bay,
Scattered boats gently sway in their moorings.

Making me feel like I am flying amongst them - a bird on a wing,
Flocks of terns swoop and rise in graceful circles close beside me.
Dexterously stepping over the green covered rocks on the shore, three white egrets are here too;
They keenly pick out their breakfast in the lapping tide.

With a swoop and fall, a cormorant dives deftly into the water and disappears,
Moments later the bird emerges several metres away as if out of nowhere. 
In a display of alternating flashes of grey and brilliant white, 
Plovers so small and so swift turn and glide in controlled unison.

I glance northwards towards a distant gentle hum,
There great ships are silhouetted in the waking harbour.
I stand and breathe in true appreciation;
Oh, the magnificent beauty of this new day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 11:28 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A  Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:28 PM
ELEANOR, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Bauer Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:29 PM
i felt like i was standing there with you experiencing this lovely morning. this is a beautiful poem!
Leteng Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 7:46 AM
well written, neighbour
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 6:51 AM
A beautiful poem Eleanor ! - oxox
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