Early Morning At the Beach

early morning sun
sparkles crystal blue water-
like aqua blue glass

a flock of seagulls 
hover over crashing waves-
watching for sea fish

sandpipers on shore
searching for dead crab pieces-
while chirping their song

bright pink beach roses
waif in the salty sea air-
masking ripe wetlands

tide slowly building
as the ocean is waking-
waves crashing louder

8/4/19

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Date: 1/18/2021 11:00:00 AM
I just read my comment to you the first time I saw this and can't even understand what I said with "a dat" I was on my cell phone. I really should never use it for poetry comments. Anyway, back with my congrats!! Well done!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/18/2021 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I knew what you meant! :)
Date: 1/15/2021 11:55:00 AM
- These haiku make the day nice ... a beautiful encounter with nature one early morning, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2021 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Date: 12/22/2019 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Tania
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:56:00 PM
Congrats on your HM!;)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/22/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/17/2019 8:29:00 AM
Your description of early morning on a beach is beautifully written in haiku. Congrats on your win. Nicely done.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne!
Date: 8/16/2019 3:15:00 AM
- A wonderful time to enjoy the sea ... with beautiful sunrise ... a great start to the day, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/16/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :) hugs
Date: 8/15/2019 10:06:00 PM
Tania, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/16/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve! :) hugs
Date: 8/15/2019 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this imaginative entry Tania. Masterfully created! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Silver medal! : ) xxoo
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/15/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 8/14/2019 9:05:00 AM
I love the beach and water. This brought me there, thanks.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/14/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thank you Rick! :)
Date: 8/4/2019 7:04:00 PM
you paint one of my favorite scenes. a dat at a beautiful beach! Good luck in the contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/5/2019 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! :)
Date: 8/4/2019 11:38:00 AM
One of my favorite things to do is walk along the beach in early morning, this string of haiku takes me there. Nicely written, Tania, best of luck in the contest. John
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 8/4/2019 9:13:00 AM
This is a lovely tribute to the sea. GL in the contest
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/4/2019 7:02:00 AM
Hello Tania It's a lovely poem.It describes ver well morning at the beach.Regards. Mpho Kgaswane
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/4/2019 5:58:00 AM
gorgeous gorgeous imagery Tania... i can't keep up with the contests at the moment. i love walking by the ocean we are 5 mins from a glorious beach:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Jan! :) I wish I lived that close! hugs!
Date: 8/4/2019 5:40:00 AM
Love these Tanya, the last one is my favorite, the waking ocean. Good luck. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Tom! :)
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