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Early Morning At the Beach

early morning sun sparkles crystal blue water- like aqua blue glass a flock of seagulls hover over crashing waves- watching for sea fish sandpipers on shore searching for dead crab pieces- while chirping their song bright pink beach roses waif in the salty sea air- masking ripe wetlands tide slowly building as the ocean is waking- waves crashing louder 8/4/19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2021 11:00:00 AM

I just read my comment to you the first time I saw this and can't even understand what I said with "a dat" I was on my cell phone. I really should never use it for poetry comments. Anyway, back with my congrats!! Well done!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/18/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, I knew what you meant! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 11:55:00 AM

- These haiku make the day nice ... a beautiful encounter with nature one early morning, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/15/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/22/2019 3:21:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Tania

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/22/2019 2:56:00 PM

Congrats on your HM!;)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/22/2019 6:03:00 PM

Thank you!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/17/2019 8:29:00 AM

Your description of early morning on a beach is beautifully written in haiku. Congrats on your win. Nicely done.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2019 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 3:15:00 AM

- A wonderful time to enjoy the sea ... with beautiful sunrise ... a great start to the day, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/16/2019 4:41:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise! :) hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2019 10:06:00 PM

Tania, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/16/2019 4:41:00 AM

Thank you Eve! :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/15/2019 4:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this imaginative entry Tania. Masterfully created! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Silver medal! : ) xxoo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/15/2019 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Connie!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2019 9:05:00 AM

I love the beach and water. This brought me there, thanks.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/14/2019 5:38:00 PM

Thank you Rick! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2019 7:04:00 PM

you paint one of my favorite scenes. a dat at a beautiful beach! Good luck in the contest.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/5/2019 4:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! :)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/4/2019 11:38:00 AM

One of my favorite things to do is walk along the beach in early morning, this string of haiku takes me there. Nicely written, Tania, best of luck in the contest. John

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 3:05:00 PM

Thank you John!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/4/2019 9:13:00 AM

This is a lovely tribute to the sea. GL in the contest

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 10:56:00 AM

Thank you!

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 8/4/2019 7:02:00 AM

Hello Tania It's a lovely poem.It describes ver well morning at the beach.Regards. Mpho Kgaswane

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 7:23:00 AM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2019 5:58:00 AM

gorgeous gorgeous imagery Tania... i can't keep up with the contests at the moment. i love walking by the ocean we are 5 mins from a glorious beach:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 6:53:00 AM

Thank you Jan! :) I wish I lived that close! hugs!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/4/2019 5:40:00 AM

Love these Tanya, the last one is my favorite, the waking ocean. Good luck. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/4/2019 5:44:00 AM

Thank you Tom! :)