Early Fog

Im frühen Nebel
Wo still noch das Wasser fließt
Schwimmen schon Enten


In the early fog
Where the water quietly flows 
Ducks already swimming


En la temprana  niebla
Dónde fluye silencioso el agua 
Nadan ya patos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:47 AM
What beauty that must be...Enjoyed for it brought thoughts of peace and quiet of eary morn..Sara
Austin Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:33 AM
I like the scene. Very relaxing. Love, Dave
Shango Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Very descriptive. I love how you make ordinary language to come life. Great write.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 1:13 PM
enjoyed reading today....Have a joyous inpirational new year and all through life!! Take care!
Culverhouse Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 1:13 PM
If you are on the soup....tell me something good to eat for supper?? Inspire me!!
K. Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Smiles as I read this one, Gert :) Really enjoy the images you bring in your haiku :D have a wonderful day, Gert :)
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Well the scene is so visual and so life like Gert my friend.. where have u been luv? hope u will enjoy happy holidays with luv.. and so happy to see u here again.. have missed your wonderful poetry and translations luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 7:11 AM
oh, dang,I just saw you don't have a way for me to soupmail you. WEll, here is what I wanted to say. Duck is both ha verb and a noun. So at first when I read this, the verb came in my mind, but I am sure you mean the animal ducks. right? I think it would sound even better if you said, "ducks already swimming" IN any event, a really cute image. Merry Xmas, sweet Gert! Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Gert , I really like this . Soupmail
Mehta Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Nice picture of calm and serenity in this wintry season. Not much seen on the PS, Gert. Hope you are fine. Happy holidays,
A   Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 11:31 AM
a very well painted image this is,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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