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Early Fog

Im frühen Nebel Wo still noch das Wasser fließt Schwimmen schon Enten In the early fog Where the water quietly flows Ducks already swimming En la temprana niebla Dónde fluye silencioso el agua Nadan ya patos

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Date: 1/16/2011 8:47:00 AM
What beauty that must be...Enjoyed for it brought thoughts of peace and quiet of eary morn..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:33:00 AM
I like the scene. Very relaxing. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:03:00 PM
Very descriptive. I love how you make ordinary language to come life. Great write.
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:13:00 PM
enjoyed reading today....Have a joyous inpirational new year and all through life!! Take care!
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:13:00 PM
If you are on the soup....tell me something good to eat for supper?? Inspire me!!
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:15:00 AM
Smiles as I read this one, Gert :) Really enjoy the images you bring in your haiku :D have a wonderful day, Gert :)
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Date: 12/23/2010 9:28:00 AM
Well the scene is so visual and so life like Gert my friend.. where have u been luv? hope u will enjoy happy holidays with luv.. and so happy to see u here again.. have missed your wonderful poetry and translations luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:11:00 AM
oh, dang,I just saw you don't have a way for me to soupmail you. WEll, here is what I wanted to say. Duck is both ha verb and a noun. So at first when I read this, the verb came in my mind, but I am sure you mean the animal ducks. right? I think it would sound even better if you said, "ducks already swimming" IN any event, a really cute image. Merry Xmas, sweet Gert! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:09:00 AM
Gert , I really like this . Soupmail
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:13:00 PM
Nice picture of calm and serenity in this wintry season. Not much seen on the PS, Gert. Hope you are fine. Happy holidays,
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Date: 12/22/2010 11:31:00 AM
a very well painted image this is,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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