Early Dawning of the Season

Early dawning of The Season,
Close knit, yet far sighted.
That jazz trio and song in the shadows,
Lobbying One Hope, and One Light.

A watchful gaze, piercing darkness,
The eye of the night, mesmerizing in fullness.
The sweep of The Spirit,
Soaking, saturating…sequestering silence.

Staring in stark realization,
A clouded conscience, childish chagrin.
The train of temperament, eluding its own path,
And unto its own.

Woeful remorse, within hapless emptiness
I shudder.
For if Thou hasten Thy Hand,
Will I be ready for Heaven.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 7:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Titus. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
Loh Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Always a pleasure hearing from you, Carol. Am sure you'll receive some inspiration as you diligently seek it. Blessed Christmas to you too. Titus.
Lim Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 7:36 AM
I felt warmness around me, dancing through. Leon
Loh Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 4:42 AM
Glad the piece brought such an emotion, Leon. Thanks for your kind comment. Titus.
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December 16, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Nicely deep. Day-vo.
Loh Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 4:41 AM
Thanks Dave, pleasure having you here. Titus.
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