Early Crime

EARLY CRIME

Old man’s garden  overcrowding
Vegetables  between the roses flowering
Network maze of strings and sticks
Wheelbarrow with stones and bricks
Rainwater in old metal barrel.

Late summer  decaying cabbage roses – pink coral
Intoxicating perfume and petals about to fall
Hanging not by threads and strings  but by sheer will
Their life shorter than a shy girl’s laugh
Tomorrow  they would fall off
Delicate soft flakes of perfumed damask
Wide open the  last drops of sun to ask 
And the last last rays of rain to soak.

Left alone while two men sat and  spoke
I played with roses’ stems
Bending under the weight of blooms on them 
As  I felt the softness of  the petals
The  biggest ones dropped all
Their  damask  in an instant
Down to the petal-carpeted soil it went
I was left clutching the thorny stems
With no flower at all on them. 

Men came back after their chat and
Found me with string and stem in hand
They joked about my  rose-destruction time
But I felt guilt, it was a real crime.
In my mind’s maze still remembered  today,
Child memories do not easily decay.

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Entered in   Paula Swanson's Contest   "Childhood Memory"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 29, 2011 at 12:41 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Syd. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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