Eagle Wing

A little girl
In a small city
Walks to school
Without eating a meal

She sings her situation
In a quiet place
Sleeping on the floor
No money for text books

Poor parents she had
Lives in a small mud house
Families avoid them
Friends walk away

She eats mockery
In her school
Only one uniform
A burst pair of shoes

Eagle passing by
Hears her sorrowful song
Put her on his wings
And give her a place above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 4, 2016 at 1:26 PM
well done
Sanders Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a person who loves sad story so you know I love this story because of it's truth. Excellent poem poet
Nimley Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 9:26 AM
I just want to inform you that my first book of poetry is published. it is Titled" Water of The Brook" It is available on Amazon and Barnes N noble
Nimley Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Thanks for the compliments. I think sad stories need to be told.
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:00 AM
How powerful these lines are. I am SO happy you ended this the way you did. This deserved that kind of ending. Magnificent!
Nimley Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 9:29 AM
My first book of poetry has just been published. It is Titled" water of The Brook" it is available on Amazon and Barnes N Noble. I hope u will get a copy.
Nimley Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Drake, i think sad stories need to be told for they lead to great success.sad situations prepares star for a bright future.
Madonsela Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:57 AM
Touching, reads like a sad story . loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *smiles* Ron
Nimley Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Thanks Ronny, Sometimes it good to tell the sad stories that gave birth to success.
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:45 AM
- It's beautiful .... but so touching ... very well written, Olivia! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Nimley Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 9:31 AM
My first book of poetry has been published and it is "Titled Water of The Brook" It is available on Amazon and Barnes N Noble.
Nimley Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Anne, thanks for appreciating my work.sad situations are the stepping stone to success.
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