Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Eagle

blocks sun with wing clouds

                               scans the brow of frozen lake...,

                                      talons hooked a fish




Placed : 7th

Wild Animal Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllable count : how many syllables
Date: 12-04-2022

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Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2022 at 2:55 PM Love the "brow of frozen lake" congrats on the win, Patri. Patri Venkata Ramana April 24, 2022 at 2:07 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments!

Christuraj Alex April 18, 2022 at 9:07 PM "wing clouds" - Beautiful metaphor. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana April 24, 2022 at 2:06 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin April 18, 2022 at 8:53 AM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku! Patri Venkata Ramana April 24, 2022 at 2:06 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.