Eager Bee

Let's go, let's go, it's so sunny;
we need to rush, make some honey.
Come on, come on, we've wasted hours
out there are just loads of flowers
stamens offering nectar sweet
my eager wings just beat-beat-beat.
There's such a buzz; can't we just go,
why oh why is our hive so slow?

Calm down, my little stripey friend.
First, we must to the queen attend.
Then she will send her scouts away
to find the biggest best bouquet.
When they come back, they do a dance,
no, not the kind that means romance.
They do a buzzing dance to show
the perfect point we all must go.


Bee Creative Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri   
Date wrote: 28th May 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:17 PM
This is cute, so fun and lighthearted. Well done.
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you
Watts Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 2:19 AM
Hi Terry I enjoyed your little bee poem. Great rhyme and meter so good luck in the contest A real buzz Cheers Christine
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Christine
Meadows Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 10:56 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Miller Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 12:55 AM
Thank you, Jeanette, for your kind comment
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