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Eager Bee

Let's go, let's go, it's so sunny; we need to rush, make some honey. Come on, come on, we've wasted hours out there are just loads of flowers stamens offering nectar sweet my eager wings just beat-beat-beat. There's such a buzz; can't we just go, why oh why is our hive so slow? Calm down, my little stripey friend. First, we must to the queen attend. Then she will send her scouts away to find the biggest best bouquet. When they come back, they do a dance, no, not the kind that means romance. They do a buzzing dance to show the perfect point we all must go. Bee Creative Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri Date wrote: 28th May 2022

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Date: 5/30/2022 2:17:00 PM
This is cute, so fun and lighthearted. Well done.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/30/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/29/2022 2:19:00 AM
Hi Terry I enjoyed your little bee poem. Great rhyme and meter so good luck in the contest A real buzz Cheers Christine
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/30/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Christine
Date: 5/28/2022 10:56:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/29/2022 12:55:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette, for your kind comment

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