Each breath

Each breath I take is wrapped in the shroud
of your negligent heart beating loud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Wow fantastic couplet, congratulations
Achara Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:22 PM
oh, wow....this is succinct and resonates with me. best wishes with this contest entry.
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