Dying While Living

Leaf lives while it dies.
Drained of its quenching water,
One drop at a time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:45 PM
A fine haiku with nice imagery
Culverhouse Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:34 PM
thought provoking poem--I like it!
Haick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:01 PM
A good one for the contest, Marty! Good luck even though I doubt you'll be needing it! Peace, Audrey
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April 23, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Enjoyed the Haiku,,Irma
Murphy Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:32 AM
very nice if for contest good luck well done faleshia
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