Dying Star

A dying star in the middle of nowhere
Where there's no water, earth nor air
No temple, no church, no mosque nor prayers
Stood as I saw what she wears
Nothing but the shining waves of a brown hair
The green and the grey is a killer combination, I swear
I'm helpless, this is not fair...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Smith Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 12:20 AM
An excellent debut poem on the soup. A fresh style, with the camera giving a new perspective. Look forward to reading more of your work. Regards David in NZ
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December 21, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Your poem is gorgeously written. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope that you will share more poems, and soon.
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December 22, 2018 at 2:45 AM
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