Dying Slowly

Dying Slowly
by Cate Rock

Dressed in sorrow 
Words not followed

Dead already
Hands unsteady

Tears fall 
You feel so weak,
So used,
So small.

Lying on the ground,
Stone cold dead,
Never to be found. 




Submission date : 2009-04-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 24, 2010 at 5:33 PM
eh; not very original; depressing. I would sort this kind of work into the file saved for the let-out-my-feelings-but-keep-it-to-myself times of life. Use more creative work, or funny, for this site. (See the "what is good poetry" link)
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