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Dying Slowly

Dying Slowly by Cate Rock Dressed in sorrow Words not followed Dead already Hands unsteady Tears fall You feel so weak, So used, So small. Lying on the ground, Stone cold dead, Never to be found. Submission date : 2009-04-08

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Date: 1/24/2010 5:33:00 PM
eh; not very original; depressing. I would sort this kind of work into the file saved for the let-out-my-feelings-but-keep-it-to-myself times of life. Use more creative work, or funny, for this site. (See the "what is good poetry" link)
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