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Dying Rose

Vanishing beauty Your charms rest in memory Altars chant her name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2013 6:13:00 AM
Nice haiku James.
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Date: 10/6/2012 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations James on a well deserved win!
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:57:00 AM
It's a wonderful sacrifice penned with golden pen. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/18/2012 12:45:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL job of writing on this haiku, Jimbo...not surprised it's a winner...have a fine day my friend! - Tim
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Date: 8/16/2012 5:05:00 PM
Beautiful and touching, James...congrats to you! Love and Blessings :))
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Date: 8/15/2012 11:22:00 PM
James, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD
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Date: 8/15/2012 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest James.
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Date: 8/13/2012 7:29:00 PM
this is so touching James, well done. Congratulations on your win, however I suspect this poem is more than a contest. Take care Lee
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on a winnning haiku.
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:26:00 AM
Jimbo, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:21:00 AM
James, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD
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Date: 8/2/2012 12:03:00 AM
You made it a powerful symbol,James.Thanks for congrats!
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:08:00 PM
Lovely, James. And I take it as symbolic.
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Date: 7/29/2012 7:21:00 AM
Soup mail...Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful and deep haiku James - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/19/2012 3:11:00 PM
Short but so deep, erupts into many visions for my mind to ponder. Thanks for commenting on Depression
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Date: 7/19/2012 12:14:00 PM
..and her lingering presence stirs.. such soulful write, james... goood job!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:32:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing, Jancarl
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:18:00 AM
This Haiku dear poet, is so uplifting ! A caption in bronze beneath an oil painting is the vision which fills my thoughts as I read this wonderful write of yours James ! Have a wonderful week sir....much love, james
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Date: 7/15/2012 10:53:00 PM
Love this, simply beautiful.~Tammy~
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Date: 7/15/2012 2:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Not sure your intended interpertation..I feel that it is deeper than seems..Sara
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Date: 7/15/2012 9:04:00 AM
But the scent remains Jim; love this image you give to me! :)
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Date: 7/14/2012 1:53:00 PM
lovely words and imagery James givinng this flower persona .. hope u r doing well luv.. we are all wonderful..
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Date: 7/13/2012 6:44:00 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Jimbo. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 8:13:00 PM
This is beautiful James .Love it!!
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