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Dying Love

Our love, once like two vibrant leaves Vigorous, lively, and vital; Both clinging in a summer breeze Beautiful and ornamental. But time passes and our love died Not unlike autumns foliage Losing its vivaciousness-dried, Withering in an outdoor stage Where the slightest breeze sets them free And separate but to perish. Our love like the leaves on the tree Where once it had thrived and flourished Now a feeling in its last throes Feebly lingering to let go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/23/2010 3:15:00 PM
Heartfelt and emotional. Perfect words of expression! Thank you for sharing! Milt
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Date: 9/23/2010 2:34:00 PM
very touching and carries a good message to all - relationships ain't easy - the longer the relationship the more work that needs to be done. great work, thanks, chuck
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:35:00 AM
Very creative and expressive write on Dying love, Albert
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