Dying Inside Change

Dying inside change
Adulthood and childhood clash
Both worlds lost within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 7:03 AM
You describe well the inner turmoil that accompanies the transition from childhood to adulthood. Surely there is something lost as we go through these changes. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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July 25, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Doesn't need to be. Everyone needs the child within to keep life light. Good work. Sara
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