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Dying inside change

Dying inside change Adulthood and childhood clash Both worlds lost within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/25/2009 7:03:00 AM
You describe well the inner turmoil that accompanies the transition from childhood to adulthood. Surely there is something lost as we go through these changes. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2009 4:46:00 AM
Doesn't need to be. Everyone needs the child within to keep life light. Good work. Sara
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