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Dying Inside

Breaking down within, Tears only felt and never seen, My strength is underestimated, To them I am a machine My heart is in 1000 pieces, But they will never know, For to them I am a fortress, No emotion will I show I smile although I am hurt, I laugh when I want to cry, A facade is what I wear as a mask, When I feel like I am dying inside Instead of steady brick, My emotional walls are made of sand, I have been told I seem to confident, But my worth I can measure in the palm of a childs hand Like the night sky... So starless in the city, Dark depths always seem to surround the girl I once knew as "Me"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 1:18:00 AM
thanks for commenting on my work. i think the first stanza is incredible on this piece, and i agree we write quite similarly. i look forward to keeping up with your work :)
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:19:00 PM
This also sounds just like I've felt for so many years. Hope you find the healing of a broken heart and spirit just like I've found. In Christ's Love.
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Date: 5/12/2011 11:28:00 AM
i know how this feels 100 percent..but I know healing is coming for me soon...what i have deserved for two years finally..a few more weeks and I will be free, justified and healed...what i was owed a long time ago...I can relate to this poem
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Date: 5/12/2011 11:11:00 AM
wonderful write of a sad situation...TAH
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