Dying In Drunk Love

The journal, the standard bearer of a secret life
The tears it took, all the years of wine
The writer, the cheating carer of a dying wife
Noting her decline, line by line

A jot in the journal and a fling of the flask
Then a visit to the wife is too much to ask
The journal is soggy and he is a sleep
The phone gets him groggy with a beep-beep-beep

Its the hospital she's in trouble!
He looks at himself quickly, at his unkempt stubble
He gets there too late though
But holds her high, then rests her low
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 14, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Very interesting poem James.. intriguing lines to the reader.. enjoyed your most creative write ..with luv.. happy weekend..
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