Dying Alone

A rope snaps,
nobody hears,
Does anyone fall?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Aron. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 10:42 PM
Lovely Aron. Many congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:20 PM
ARON, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD
Poet Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Very nice senryu!Congrats on your win!
Patrikar Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 10:38 PM
my god! congratulations :) well done!!!
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 9:16 PM
Sad, thought provoking. Well done Lee
Grisetti Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 5:59 PM
congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:21 PM
LIke the one about the tree in the forest! But humanized. Congrats on your win, aron.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Congratulations Aron, philosophical one here xx
Poet Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Good Senryu here Aron.Enjoyed.
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