Dying..

Lock me away in the tower of dread and fear,
Watch my life slowly disapear,
Burning a painful death,
Taking in my last breath!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Hey Joanie! What a bummer, but so well articulated... Best wishes, Keith
Higgins Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 6:22 AM
I can feel the suffication in this write.. the gasp for life that is sucked away...strong write that penetrates.
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