Benjamin Bartley Poet Rhyme

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8th place winner!!! Unseeking Seeker's Dweller of Our Heart Poetry Contest.

Dweller of Our Heart

“the essence in us is the same 
     as the essence of the sun” - Unseeking Seeker 

the essential elemental 
     that holy fire in everyone 
sparks the imagination 
     that enlightenment can come 
one day with a little intervention 
     not unlike solarizing flares, electrifying chairs 
and the unlimited power of the Son 
     some day with a lot of aspiring inspiration 
We’ll all spontaneously combust 
     it's all for one and one for all 
          seeking the Seeker
                that’s in all of us

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Sam Kauffman August 16, 2025 at 10:43 AM Congratulations on your win, Benjamin! Your poem truly is sparked by "that holy fife in everyone!" Wonderful word use that creates fresh language. Blessings to you!

Ghairo Daniels August 15, 2025 at 11:43 PM Beautifully said, Benjamin. Straight forward & filled with simple knowingness. Congrats on this lovely offering. Beautiful energy your way.

Kim Rodrigues August 11, 2025 at 5:02 PM Good one :)

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2025 at 1:18 PM Creative lines penned. We all want a Savior and want to come to Him. Many never do though. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K