Dweller of Our Heart

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Human written on 8/5/2025, for Dweller of our heart Poetry Contest, sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Contemplate the sun, that celestial jewel who happily burns hydrogen for fuel, and shines away the night, so then, before our earthly eyes, we see vast and glorious blue skies - and plants that photosynthesis from its warmth and light. The greens we eat will then provide the sun's vitality, which we have inside, causing us to shine - and, like the sun, we can share the energy we have to spare. So, I propose a toast or prayer to the universe divine.

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