Dwell On What Goes Well

Don't want to dwell
On what doesn't go well
Sometimes you see yourself move one step forward
And soon, you find yourself take two steps backward
Life moves that way when you dwell
On what in your life doesn't go well.

Clouds have gathered in the sky
Ready to show their game of might
Some will decide to stay home today
Others will visit someone alone to bring a ray.
Don't want to dwell on the rain
For any day, someone needs you to come their way.

Don't want to dwell on the heat
When in other parts of the land, folks face fear
Perhaps their crop has been destroyed by flood
Others live in places that are under winter frost
Don't want to dwell on the sun too hot
When there are those who suffer great loss.

Don't want to dwell on the thorns
Of the rose, but the beauty of her crown
It will then receive the proper care
That will only enhance the beauty of her ware 
Dwell on the things that make you do well
Dwell on what in your life goes well.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 08.24.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 9:50 AM
You cannot live in the past ... lovely poem with a beautifully put message Caroline thanks for the lovely comment on my poem love Jayne
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 8:35 AM
I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today Caroline. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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August 25, 2010 at 8:05 AM
interesting subject, enjoyed this poem very much. Harry
Neels Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 2:29 AM
Great advice Caroline, sometimes we tend to dwell on things that could have been instead of enjoying what we have.. Awesome write, love Wilma
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