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Duty Calls But Camera Is Louder

. Drawing me_silver sparkling from light on raindrenched Lambsear Duty said no when longingly my camera called come take shots Quickly did necessary work_grabbed camera ...ahh....fresh air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/7/2011 12:36:00 PM
cute little piece, really enjoyed reading it. and thank you for taking time to read The Old Train Depot and for your comment.
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Date: 3/31/2011 9:53:00 AM
THanks for your comment on my "remember poem" Hope this note finds you doing well. Take Care, Jancarl
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:55:00 AM
Great fun : ) Hope you're much better. Love from Jack
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:22:00 AM
This is a great Sijo Sara! I can see ya now....all scrambling to get that 'shot' ! Have a great day dear poet ! Much love, james
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Date: 3/31/2011 6:07:00 AM
funny....nicely penned
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Date: 3/31/2011 4:31:00 AM
hey girl, this is Poefree, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem. I dig your writing style, but it could be a bit more profane for my liking. Look, here's the thing, profanity is implied on this pathetic planet which people are pissing on, and I don't even get why a poetry room would restrain a poet who is only trying to use profanity as an exclamation mark, not for selacious reasons. Dig? yours in peace, pain, poetry, protection, and per chance, perfection (your's) free!
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Date: 3/30/2011 11:51:00 PM
This is a brilliant write from you Sara!love it-kashinath
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Date: 3/30/2011 9:37:00 PM
Wonder;ful words Sara.. much good luck in the contest with this amazing Sijo..luv.. truly a cute one ..cleverly contrived my friend..
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