Dutifully

flowery bush performs her duty
dry callused flesh torn by beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:26 PM
I love the juxtapositioning that occurs in this one. That great twist you put on it. Excellent Crystalline!
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