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Dust Storm

parched barren earth thirsts
unforgiving winds assault
the destitute land

TLH  ©  07-09-2012

Haiku or Senryu?

naturehaiku

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Matthew Anish

July 24, 2012 at 7:09 AM

Evocative work here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 scheme which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Painted Hunter

July 23, 2012 at 3:12 PM

I love a good haiku...this is a nice one...Caleb

Steven Beesley

July 16, 2012 at 9:50 PM

Very nicely written.

Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2012 at 9:08 PM

Very nice one, Tanya. I really liked the assonance of earth and thirsts together!

Joseph May

July 10, 2012 at 7:01 PM

nice imagery in this haiku Tanya...thanks for sharing...hugs...Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

July 10, 2012 at 4:35 PM

Tanya... wow.. reminds me of a movie called Hidalgo... most enjoyed... pd

Kash Poet

July 10, 2012 at 4:15 PM

Beautiful!!!A haiku I am sure!!!

Russell Sivey

July 10, 2012 at 3:20 PM

Wow, this Haiku really enveloped me! I really enjoyed your incredible descriptions of a barren destitute land, so well put! Great Work!!

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