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Dust of Pain

In the seamless bright sky mine I’m on cloud nine Fantasy wind Flutters my mind. Cloud sails away on sudden squall See my dreams fall In the abyss Of beleaguered bliss. Life’s cracked trail tries to circumvent Crushed heart’s torment From the dust of pain I’ll rise again. July 21, 2021 For Brian Strand's Contest : A Brian Strand 4 To 14 Line

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Date: 7/28/2021 5:49:00 AM
Bittersweet but filled with hope. Congratulations, Subimal!
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Date: 7/26/2021 12:38:00 PM
Very nicely penned Subimal, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:29:00 AM
Hi Subimal, Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/21/2021 6:09:00 AM
Well done, Subimal! Both you and I mentioned cloud nine today.
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