Dust Covered Phone

No point in a phone when you're no longer known
And the sound of alone... is a dialling tone



6 October 2021 Extracted from ‘Cast Aside’
For Contest: Your Best Rhyming Couplet 3
Sponsor: L Milton Hankins
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January 3, 2022 at 1:11 AM
So many unknown. One bedroom places are an indictment on greed and backward thinking. Two bedrooms give more options and are more eco-friendly using less resources. One kitchen instead of two, less plumbing. Will read more of your work. You hit nail on head with this one. all the best for 2022. David in NZ
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January 3, 2022 at 3:12 AM
Thanks, David. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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October 6, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Sad but true Terry, an excellent couplet… Belle
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October 7, 2021 at 3:45 PM
Thanks Belle, it’s from one of my own favourites, ‘Cast Aside’ which was inspired by a very early Sparks song called ‘High C’ and from which I borrowed the title
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October 6, 2021 at 4:42 PM
good one Terry I like the internal rhyme too:-) hugs jan xx
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October 7, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Thanks Jan, glad you liked this. Terry
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