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Night's falling Slow dance And music's drifting out of doors Under the stars the ocean roars Whirl dip Fragrance fest Mellow moon Scarlet sunset Almost gone And Mars can be seen above In the season of the dove Diamond stars Pearl moon Summer dance Warm breeze birdsong trees A night of color and song And the moments move slowly along Laughter inside Gay revelers Dreamy days Written on 1/3/2021 For: Trinet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2021 3:26:00 AM

Evelyn, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/20/2021 9:41:00 AM

You have my warmest thanks, Eve. I'm glad you enjoyed the dance. Hugs Evelyn

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2021 1:43:00 PM

such wonderful images Evelyn, I especially love the middle stanza many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2021 2:40:00 PM

Thank you for your warm appreciation and kind congratulations, Jan. hugs xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/19/2021 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful write Evelyn, Congrats on your win..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2021 11:18:00 AM

You have my heartfelt thanks, Joseph. Your contest was awesome.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/4/2021 12:21:00 PM

Oh nicely done Evelyn. Sounds to me like a summer dance held on the beach. The music drifts outdoors to the softly lapping waves as you dance and play on the beach. Lovely. This took me there God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2021 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Judy. It is delighting to know that my poem has evolved pleasant mental images. I'm so happy that it did. Have a lovely rest of your day, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/4/2021 4:25:00 AM

So beautiful! If I need a cheer-up, this is where it can be found. God bless!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2021 6:10:00 AM

It is so great to know that my poem brings cheer. Thank you and God bless!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/3/2021 11:01:00 PM

A dreamy poem that makes the heart warm. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2021 6:08:00 AM

That is so nice to know. Thank you. :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/3/2021 9:47:00 PM

Evelyn, You described a fine time of day for a dance 'Warm breeze ~~ birdsong trees ~~ A night of color and song.' I could listen to your Verse go on and on. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2021 6:08:00 AM

I am so glad you feel that way, Richard. I appreciate your telling me so. Kindest regards, Evelyn :=)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/3/2021 8:13:00 PM

Your enchanting verse resonates deep within me, so suggestive of a "Martian Chronicles" reincarnation or restoration... The book was written by Ray Bradbury in about 1950 or so, and I could swear that you and he drink from the same poetic cup in describing elusive, colorful dance scenes. Bravo, Evelyn! ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2021 6:05:00 AM

That is quite interesting, Gershon. I'm so glad this musical verse struck a chord with you. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Evelyn :=)