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Dusky Dancers

Night's falling
Slow dance
And music's drifting out of doors
Under the stars the ocean roars
Whirl dip
Fragrance fest
Mellow moon

Scarlet sunset
Almost gone
And Mars can be seen above
In the season of the dove
Diamond stars
Pearl moon
Summer dance

Warm breeze
birdsong trees
A night of color and song
And the moments move slowly along
Laughter inside
Gay revelers
Dreamy days


Written on 1/3/2021
For: Trinet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2021

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Eve Roper Date: 1/20/2021 3:26:00 AM Evelyn, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/20/2021 9:41:00 AM You have my warmest thanks, Eve. I'm glad you enjoyed the dance. Hugs Evelyn

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2021 1:43:00 PM such wonderful images Evelyn, I especially love the middle stanza many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/19/2021 2:40:00 PM Thank you for your warm appreciation and kind congratulations, Jan. hugs xx

Joseph May Date: 1/19/2021 5:39:00 AM Beautiful write Evelyn, Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/19/2021 11:18:00 AM You have my heartfelt thanks, Joseph. Your contest was awesome.

Judy Ball Date: 1/4/2021 12:21:00 PM Oh nicely done Evelyn. Sounds to me like a summer dance held on the beach. The music drifts outdoors to the softly lapping waves as you dance and play on the beach. Lovely. This took me there God Bless, JB Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/4/2021 1:38:00 PM Thank you so much, Judy. It is delighting to know that my poem has evolved pleasant mental images. I'm so happy that it did. Have a lovely rest of your day, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/4/2021 4:25:00 AM So beautiful! If I need a cheer-up, this is where it can be found. God bless! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/4/2021 6:10:00 AM It is so great to know that my poem brings cheer. Thank you and God bless!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/3/2021 11:01:00 PM A dreamy poem that makes the heart warm. ~~ Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/4/2021 6:08:00 AM That is so nice to know. Thank you. :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2021 9:47:00 PM Evelyn, You described a fine time of day for a dance 'Warm breeze ~~ birdsong trees ~~ A night of color and song.' I could listen to your Verse go on and on. -Richard Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/4/2021 6:08:00 AM I am so glad you feel that way, Richard. I appreciate your telling me so. Kindest regards, Evelyn :=)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/3/2021 8:13:00 PM Your enchanting verse resonates deep within me, so suggestive of a "Martian Chronicles" reincarnation or restoration... The book was written by Ray Bradbury in about 1950 or so, and I could swear that you and he drink from the same poetic cup in describing elusive, colorful dance scenes. Bravo, Evelyn! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/4/2021 6:05:00 AM That is quite interesting, Gershon. I'm so glad this musical verse struck a chord with you. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Evelyn :=)