Dusk's Sacred Shawl

Please do not convince me of my ignorance or naivety. Naive to the cynic, the sun sets on my faith and all my eyes see. Eyes see bright visions of dusk's inner beauty wrapped in sacred shawl. The sacred shawled in heavenly grace, never shall cold nights fall. Cold nights fall away, no threatening winds; souls laud in faith's armor. Silver armor of faith lifts me at dusk in wafting spiritual myrhh. The aroma of myrhh resonates from Eden's blooming floral praise. Of flowering praise, a melody sings the poet's love on sunlit days. These sunny days sweeten lives with hope christened in dusky starlight, Starlight reflects love and an aura of truth, repelling darkest plights. Plights from our darkest earthly nights are left buried in ancient dirt; dirt falls from the ancient in sacred shawl, convinced they shall never hurt. - By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, August 14, 2012 for the Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/21/2012 11:58:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:38:00 PM
Congrats Rhonda!! I Just love the flow.
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:53:00 AM
Rhonda belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 1:55:00 PM
((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:39:00 AM
Rhonda, this is so beautifully done with its imagery, I am glad to see it now as I go thru the winners' list. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:33:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda on your win with this beautiful poem.Perhaps you are the only one to do it in rhyming form.
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Date: 8/18/2012 9:15:00 AM
so tender the mood set by this poem that warms the heart , rhonda!... sweet cheers for your glowing win in my wreath contest!..:) huggs!
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