Duskfall

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dusk
ominous, ghastly--
brooding, cunning, hovering
enigma, maze, phantom, alchemy
gripping, imposing, enveloping
shadowy, moonless
nightfall



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Sparkling Diamonds Contest
For Joseph May     6/16/2019

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/26/2019 2:35:00 PM

Hi Nette my friend, congratulation on your lovely and clever Diamante - beautiful write. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 9:23:00 PM

Nicely written Nette, Congrats on your win..

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/25/2019 6:59:00 PM

Nette congrats on your placement!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/20/2019 8:11:00 AM

Hi Nette, your pen has churned out another gem my friend - dusk to night is my favorite time of the day. Beautiful write - hugs Jennifer.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/17/2019 5:40:00 AM

You make me want to dip into your beautiful ebon night, lovely imagery Nette, as always you make your pen leak magic, xo

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/16/2019 9:47:00 PM

The moody magical and enthralling atmosphere of your dramatic diamante is fantastic. Your artistry shines beautifully in this dark gem, Nette. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 6/16/2019 9:03:00 PM

Great for the contest, Nette. Hugs dear friend

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2019 5:33:00 PM

Nice take on the contest. This diamante flows so seamlessly! Warm wishes, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/16/2019 4:17:00 PM

Like how you done this Nette, Good luck. Tom

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2019 4:17:00 PM

Your Diamante glitters, Nette, even though it's enveloped in darkness. The reader feels the ominous atmosphere which pervades this moonless night. Regards & Hugs // paul