Dusk

Dusk falls light fading
in the half light lives mystery
secrets of the dark


Secrets of the dark
what lurks in deepest night time?
scarey shadows loom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 9:15 PM
I remember being scared of shadows as I walked home in the dark when I was a kid. Boy could I run fast
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:58 AM
I am not scarey Richard lol seems this caught you up Ty for reading hugs Shadow x smile
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 6:38 PM
love the way you penned this one...it has that mysterious feel as so dusk and night... great write shadow :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:56 AM
Hi Sandra nice of you to visit me glad you enjoyed the dusk Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 6:00 PM
dusk is such a cool word to do poems about. Nice one, Shadow. Just realized, your name is in your poem!!
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:55 AM
hi Andrea yes my name has a habit of popping up lol dusk makes me think of dreamtime Ty for reading
Devnath  Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Dusk to night worded with few words in beautiful haiku. Loved always, my friend, bl
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:54 AM
hi BL dusk is a beautiful time Ty for reading Shadow x smile
May Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 5:43 PM
very nice haiku Shadow....best wishes
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:52 AM
Hi Joseph and Ty so much Shadow x smile hugs
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