Dusk

dusk has closed the day

into night, with lowered lids

the moon a flashlight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 20, 2013 at 8:34 PM
love the light the moon gives.... guides... Lorraine, I love your poem, its a great tribute to all moon lovers... SKAT
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July 6, 2013 at 11:39 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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July 6, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Nice Haiku, you have set the scene so well, such great imagery and mood.
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July 5, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Very serene. I love dusk only 2nd to the start of a sunrise. Wonderful setting!
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