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Dusk

dusk has closed the day into night, with lowered lids the moon a flashlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/20/2013 8:34:00 PM
love the light the moon gives.... guides... Lorraine, I love your poem, its a great tribute to all moon lovers... SKAT
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Date: 7/6/2013 11:39:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:02:00 AM
Nice Haiku, you have set the scene so well, such great imagery and mood.
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:32:00 AM
Very serene. I love dusk only 2nd to the start of a sunrise. Wonderful setting!
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