Dusk

Dusk, I wait for you For you to whisk me away Away from here, far away from here Here is my hand, twilight take me down Down to the river of night to rest To rest upon the sweet edge of the dusk. Written by Gina Young 8/7/12 For the contest Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk by Nette Onclaud

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David Williams

Date: 12/21/2012 3:31:00 AM

Gina I love this very romantic write of yours, the men are queuing up can you hear them...David

Gina Young
Date: 6/4/2013 9:20:00 PM

Your so sweet...thanx luv

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/26/2012 1:18:00 AM

good poem. I've enjoyed reading - JH

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2012 1:46:00 PM

Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2012 8:38:00 AM

Gina, a very good poem for the contest, wish you luck and hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gina Young
Date: 8/9/2012 3:18:00 PM

Thank u Anne Lise, its much appreciated!

David Williams

Date: 8/8/2012 1:43:00 AM

back again, this really is pure poetry...I love it...David

Gina Young
Date: 8/8/2012 3:19:00 PM

Thank u so much David! I wasnt even sure that I was doing it correctly as I had never heard of a wreath poem before. And everything I write is in prose/free verse... I experiment with other types but i just write as the words come and its hard to do that in form. But thanx again!!! You are wonderful!

David Williams

Date: 8/7/2012 4:36:00 PM

Gina a good entree, good luck..David