Gina Young Poet Verse

Dusk

Dusk, I wait for you
For you to whisk me away
Away from here, far away from here
Here is my hand, twilight take me down
Down to the river of night to rest
To rest upon the sweet edge of the dusk.


Written by Gina Young 
8/7/12
For the contest Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk by Nette Onclaud

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David Williams December 21, 2012 at 3:31 AM Gina I love this very romantic write of yours, the men are queuing up can you hear them...David Gina Young June 4, 2013 at 9:20 PM Your so sweet...thanx luv

Honestly J.T. August 26, 2012 at 1:18 AM good poem. I've enjoyed reading - JH

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2012 at 1:46 PM Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2012 at 8:38 AM Gina, a very good poem for the contest, wish you luck and hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Gina Young August 9, 2012 at 3:18 PM Thank u Anne Lise, its much appreciated!

David Williams August 8, 2012 at 1:43 AM back again, this really is pure poetry...I love it...David Gina Young August 8, 2012 at 3:19 PM Thank u so much David! I wasnt even sure that I was doing it correctly as I had never heard of a wreath poem before. And everything I write is in prose/free verse... I experiment with other types but i just write as the words come and its hard to do that in form. But thanx again!!! You are wonderful!

David Williams August 7, 2012 at 4:36 PM Gina a good entree, good luck..David