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Dusk

burnt orange tapestry
   across the shadowed skyline...
      day flashes goodbye

Copyright © Deb Wilson | Year Posted 2012

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February 25, 2012 at 9:00 PM

Nice scene of a sunset. You handled the form well - which is not easy to do. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gautami Phookan

February 25, 2012 at 1:16 PM

Beautiful images here of sundown..Congrats Deb on your fine win in haiku contest. love, gautami

February 25, 2012 at 10:12 AM

Nice haiku, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

February 24, 2012 at 6:08 AM

Very good juxtaposition here by you Deb.Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2012 at 5:33 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Deb. Love, Carol

February 23, 2012 at 10:33 PM

a gem of a 'ku, deb... congrats on your win and huggs!:)

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2012 at 8:53 PM

What a great metaphorical one, day flashing goodbye. Congrats in the contest.

February 23, 2012 at 8:15 PM

Congrats on this orange skyline!! Gwendolen

February 23, 2012 at 5:51 PM

a painterly image congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Charles Henderson

February 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM

I don't know why I have not noticed your name so much lately. A pleasant surprise to find your poem in my contest but no surprise at the talent in this entry.

February 24, 2012 at 2:45 AM

thank you Charles..been having computer troubles..that's why I haven't been around here as much

February 23, 2012 at 8:27 AM

Smile ˜ And sooo does, Night. ˜ John!:) *

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 23, 2012 at 6:15 AM

A beautiful image you have created. If this is for the contest, it is my favorite entry. Blessings, Rhonda

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