Dusk

burnt orange tapestry across the shadowed skyline... day flashes goodbye

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Matthew Anish

Date: 2/25/2012 9:00:00 PM

Nice scene of a sunset. You handled the form well - which is not easy to do. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/25/2012 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful images here of sundown..Congrats Deb on your fine win in haiku contest. love, gautami

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2012 10:12:00 AM

Nice haiku, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 6:08:00 AM

Very good juxtaposition here by you Deb.Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Deb. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2012 10:33:00 PM

a gem of a 'ku, deb... congrats on your win and huggs!:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 8:53:00 PM

What a great metaphorical one, day flashing goodbye. Congrats in the contest.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/23/2012 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on this orange skyline!! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2012 5:51:00 PM

a painterly image congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/23/2012 5:32:00 PM

I don't know why I have not noticed your name so much lately. A pleasant surprise to find your poem in my contest but no surprise at the talent in this entry.

Deb Wilson
Date: 2/24/2012 2:45:00 AM

thank you Charles..been having computer troubles..that's why I haven't been around here as much

John Rhinem

Date: 2/23/2012 8:27:00 AM

Smile ˜ And sooo does, Night. ˜ John!:) *

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 AM

A beautiful image you have created. If this is for the contest, it is my favorite entry. Blessings, Rhonda