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Dusk

Ripples like nipples, Washed away by the oceans, No time left to miss them, Saturated by sentiment, Now drying fast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Mark. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:45:00 PM
Very creative and well expressed write on Dusk
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:53:00 PM
'ripples like nipples' is a fantastic line; conjurs up strong images and has a little tweak of humour to it emphasised by the tight rhyme
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