Dusk

Ripples like nipples,
Washed away by the oceans,
No time left to miss them, 
Saturated by sentiment,
Now drying fast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Mark. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Very creative and well expressed write on Dusk
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February 3, 2011 at 4:53 PM
'ripples like nipples' is a fantastic line; conjurs up strong images and has a little tweak of humour to it emphasised by the tight rhyme
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