Dusk

Living for the moment
                                        dying in a dream 
                                  the tomb touches down 
                                        I can feel you scream

                                      Tottal darkness has set in
                                     from now eternally
                                         I feel a deepend sadness
                                      and it's growing inside of me
    
                                      I feel the sorrow and the pain
                                     now what could I do 

                                     As the daylight turns to dusk
                                      memories of me and you .

                                                             James.................................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 29, 2010 at 8:19 AM
A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it James. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol
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