Dusk

dusk dribbles dewdrops flower petals atrophied... evening primrose blooms (Haiku) 07/28/2020
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Allison Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM
absolutely delightful Emile and i love the liberal sprinkling of alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Ah, the glory of the evening primrose.. Beautiful imagery and wonderful alliteration adorn this lovely haiku, Emile. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brain's contest.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 3:16 PM
like a nice little story of what goes on in the desert dusk! BIG congrats here.
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Beautiful alliteration and imagery Emile. with a wonderful burst of life in the "ku." Congratulations on your win!
Pinet Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Thanks Sam, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:40 AM
You did not need the photo, Emile; this poem spoke for herself and in a delightfully sincere way.
Pinet Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Thanks so much Caren, I thought I'd give Haiku a second look, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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