Dusk

dusk dribbles dewdrops flower petals atrophied... evening primrose blooms (Haiku) 07/28/2020

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2020 3:59:00 PM

absolutely delightful Emile and i love the liberal sprinkling of alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 12/17/2020 2:28:00 PM

I like the contrast in this haiku of the response to dew of the two flowers. Congratulations of your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/17/2020 9:38:00 AM

Ah, the glory of the evening primrose.. Beautiful imagery and wonderful alliteration adorn this lovely haiku, Emile. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brain's contest.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2020 3:16:00 PM

like a nice little story of what goes on in the desert dusk! BIG congrats here.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/16/2020 11:28:00 AM

Beautiful alliteration and imagery Emile. with a wonderful burst of life in the "ku." Congratulations on your win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2020 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Sam, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2020 9:40:00 AM

You did not need the photo, Emile; this poem spoke for herself and in a delightfully sincere way.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/28/2020 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Caren, I thought I'd give Haiku a second look, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.