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i'm hard
like ice

when she
comes to

me i
melt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:37 AM
nothing like the one you love to melt you...even the hardest people can melt with affection... nice penning :) hugs
Connelly Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 10:04 AM
So very true Sandra. Thank you.
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December 5, 2019 at 4:52 AM
Actually not even in Iceland ice can be hard... imagine then a strong human being made of ice...? good poetry Jeff, salute alkas
Connelly Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Thanks so much Alkas. Cin cin.
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December 5, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Poetic genius!
Connelly Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Oh please, but thank you Caren.
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