Duplex

Split family My pain within my heart wont die I try in vain to be happy The sun shines the rain falls seasons changing The bonds broken daughter hurting time lost Memoir happy but sad mind cries hearts tears Soul longs for love all gone With new love for me true but one never again never the same Now lost always to live without is pain to love again for sure As one never again Contest - Duplex Sponsor - Jan Allison Date - 12/07/2016

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Mark Martin

Date: 12/12/2016 11:06:00 AM

Hi Mark. Great poem - not an easy firm to write in. Congrats! :-)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 10:21:00 PM

Thank you for comment and reading Mark - all the best there. Regards, Mark

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 5:41:00 AM

Hi Mark, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Alexis - I appreciate your comments and reading, Regards, Mark

Darren White

Date: 12/11/2016 12:18:00 AM

Coming back to you with congratulations.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 12:40:00 AM

Thank you Darren - Much appreciated. Regards, Mark

Janis Thompson

Date: 12/10/2016 7:51:00 PM

A true song of heartbreak well written. Congratulations.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 12:39:00 AM

Thank you Janis - all the best there! Regards, Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2016 7:11:00 PM

Heartbreaking poem Mark I felt the pain in every line:-(I guess many can relate after the breakdown in a relationship:-( Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/12/2016 12:39:00 AM

Thank you Jan - much appreciated. Regards, Mark

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/7/2016 7:52:00 AM

Hi Mark, I'm with Darren, I too can feel the pain in your words. I found this piece to be sad as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/8/2016 12:08:00 AM

Thank you for reading Alexis - all the best, Regards, Mark

Darren White

Date: 12/7/2016 1:20:00 AM

I feel the pain in your words, even though there is a new beginning. Good luck in the contest :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 12/7/2016 1:25:00 AM

Thanks for reading Darren - Pain of a separated family will always remain, the impact is unfortunately permanent. All the best, Mark